After hours of running through the paddock we spotted an object not far away in the distance. Jess and I walked into what looked to be, like an old abandoned lighthouse. We found ourself walking in circles up an old creaky staircase, covered in Ivy. Just as we started to reach the top Jess decided to take a rest. She leant across the wall and the whole place lit up. In freight we ran to the top of the old place, only to find a box of books. I opened one and found a map that we decided to follow…
Greetings from Australia Brooke. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. I can see the effort you put into choosing precise, descriptive vocabulary to help your readers visualise the setting, and action, in your text. You left me wondering where the map will lead you and Jess. I think this could be the beginning of an interesting adventure. Well done! 🙏😊